I thought it would be a good idea to quickly write a post about my feature article.
After I got my first draft back I only had to make a few alterations here and there. Add a little more detail aboutmy artists life; and in my text grabs put in more of the sentence so that the reader would want to read on. For example one of the text grabs talks about her break-up and to improve the article I refereced a breakup in the opening paragraph.
Today I managed to work more on the colour and fonts on my magazines pages, and the extra time I used during my free time helped me to bring it to a better standard.
Friday, 22 January 2010
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